Presentation

My feedback:

Strengths:

o   Serious in the presentation.

o   Well introduction about civil engineering

o   Use good body language (eye contact, use hand and speak well). According to Marshall (2010), “The eyes are the windows of the soul.”

o    Strong main body and reference. labspace.open.ac.uk (2013) said that the points in main body should be a summary of the original points just to remind you.

o   Give examples for the subject that I study.

Weaknesses:

o   Talk fast.

o   Feel stress and nervous.

o   Not good conclusion.

o   Need more reference and for pictures.

Gaby feedback:

Strengths:

o   He introduces himself.

o   He include in text reference.

o   He uses body language.

o   Rhetorical questions.

o   Well conclusion.

 Weaknesses:

o   Some spilling mistake.

o   Grammar.

o   He need more reference and he needs reference for pictures.

o   He speaks too fast.

o   He should dont let other students distract him.

Bibliography

labspace.open.ac.uk (2013) Preparing your presentation the main body of your presentation: a summary. Available at: http://labspace.open.ac.uk/mod/resource/view.php?id=479289 (Accessed: 7 March 2013).

Marshall L. (2010) common eye contact mistake. Available at: http://publicspeaker.quickanddirtytips.com/Eye-Contact-Mistakes.aspx (Accessed: 7 March 2013).